Little stay near tree,,,, Sudenly Wild pokemon Atacked

Allen was walking through Petalburg Wood's with his Chilramy. he spotted a small tree and decided to stay near that tree. Sudenly a wild _____ pokemon attacked from the tree, allan brought chilarmy out, ready too fight "CHILARMY, USE POUND" allan shouted the small squirrel trying to attack

((i've edited the post for you, it now has proper grammar, and your not allowed to choose what attacks you, i have to do it, and i choose if it hits or what moves it uses, you can control only your pokemon))

it was a Dustox!!

dustox was hurt badly by pound, and struck back with a confusion
((now you choose if chilarmy is hit or not, then choose chilarmies move))

a small boy handed allan a pokeball and left ((that has azuril in it))

(Chirami was hurt)
"Aghhhh" Chilarmy (Gave him Shiny Stone)(Chilramy evolve into "Chilly")
"Ok Chilly. POUND! " (Chilly jump very high... She hited by pound Dustox in head)
Chilly landed safely. "Ok... " He take the Pokeball... "GO POKEBALL!" Allan throw Pokeball into wild Dustox.

(Unfortunately, only moderators can say if a wild Pokemon faints, and if Pokemon that don't evolve through stones evolve, so azuril is still azurill, not marill)

(((Allan, many problems here,


1. Only mods and admins (like Leki said) can decide when a pokémon faints
2. No double posting please.
3. Only mods and admins decide when a pokémon evolves (like Leki said)

Please edit your post, then we can continue.)))

((That's better)))

The dustox was hit down onto the floor by the pound. The pokéball hit the dustox and it shook

once...
twice...
three times...
CLICK!

Congrats! You caught a Dustox, Lv.10
Male
Moves:
Tackle
String Shot
Poison sting
Confusion.
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Would you like to nickname it?

(No... I don't want nickname him)
"Yea" Take ball with Dustox "New member of my team. Good worl Chilly" Chilly jumped back to Allan arm. Allan continoue searching throught tall gras... Sudenly was apeared ......

A wild Combee , Female, appeared!

"Ok" Allan take Pokeball with Azurill "Meybe after battle you evolwe into Marril. GO AZURILL!" Allan sent out Azurill "AZURILL! WATER GUN!" Azurill used Water Gun...

It hit the combee, who used gust!

Azurill was hited. " Ok.... Combee used gust.... I know.... AZURILL BUBBLE!" Azuril used Bubble!

He wait patient to Combee move....

Combee dodged this time, some male Combee's coming from the hives

"Com! Combee-bee!" the female said back to them, commanding them back, to let her fight.


"Com-" A male combee started
"COMBEE!" the female interupted, them all going back.

The combee used sweet scent.

" Not good.... I've been near the lair. " He still in that same position... Look to the eye's of Combee.... "Welll....." Close Azurill in Pokeball.... He try run away fom here... Allan seen behind him a Jar of Honey. He take Honey to him Backpack.

The combee obviously felt playful, so followed Allan, hiding behind trees whenever he turnd around.

"Com... COMCOMCOM!!*" The princesses protector shouted, after finding she had gone

"Com.... Beebeecom...^" Another combee said

"Beco....*^" he replied

(((* Princess...? PRINCESS! WHERE ARE YOU???
^ Wow.. Queen Vespiqueen's gonna kill you...
*^ Yes.. She is....)))

He's in panic. Look at the Combee's "Please don't call your princes" He take from Bagpack Jar of Honey " Take it. Please... And don't call you princes"

But Sudenly Allan show hiden Pokeball " GO POKEBALL!" He throw it to the Female Combee.

Allan Look at the Other Combee's.
He Think (God damit... I haven't had a fire pokemon) Allan take some rock's from ground and start throw to the other Combee's.

((nice allan your getting better at RPing))

the combee was suprised and afeter 3 wobbles was caught

Combee lvl 13

Moves
Gust
Sweet Scent
Bug Bite
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the others saw that there princess was taken, and flew off, a few others bowing before allan

The queen combee came from the shadows, before smoothering a special honey in Allen's ear.

"Vespi...." Suddenly became "Thank you..."

Aleen could understand the Combee language.

"Please, look after my daughter well, she is only young, and one day she will become a queen, just like me, and rule many male combee"

The combee came back around her, buzzing happily

"Please, take this for your journey." She handed him a bundle. In the bundle was...

TM36 - Sludge Bomb
Combee Caller - Give to the princess, so she can call male combee nearby for help
2 Rare Candies
And an Enigma Berry
(You can only get bundles in special stories ;D)

She then turned and flew away to her now huge and visible nest, buzzing with activity.

"Ok... Thak's for All Vespiquen" Allan Took item's. And the Pokeball with Combee "Well well well.... Allan Newlight. Friend of Combee's. Huh" He look at him Chilly "Well Chilly... I have idea to come to Johto Region.... We must only go to the Mr.Peko. He will take us to the New Bark. My Hometown." Allan start walking throught the road leading to Petalburg City.

a wingul flew past. "PEEKO!! COME BACK!!!!!" an old man shouted

"Hmmmmm...... Meybe Dustox been helpfull.... GO DUSTOX!" Allan sent out Dustox "Ok Dustox.... STRING SHOOT!" Dustox used String Shoot to Wingull.

peeko got trapped and hit a tree sticking there, before the man pulled it off "thanks boy, do you need to travel over the water?"

"Yes... I need..... I want back to my Home Region. Johto. To New Bark Town. If you can take me to them. I would be good " Allan Hide the Dustox. And send out Azurill. Allan give to Azurill honey from Combee. Azurill when eat that Honey fell happy.

"sure climb on my boat and we'll leave right now" he said shoving allan on before sailing off

"Ok" Allan take him Azurill to left arm. Chilly sit still on right arm. Allan come to the board "AHOY! JOHTO I'VE COME BACK!"

(You have to make a new topic in johto now)